Thursday, December 10, 2009

Deion clayton my journay

Me,my mom,my sister, and my cousin went to this indian place in the woods and we wanted to go and explore the woods so we left and went up a big hill into this circle of trees and saw alot of cool stuff like snakes, lizards, cool looking plants and the trees were huge and then we got tired so we wanted to go back because it was getting late so we needed to get back to drive home because it was sunday. so we went back but first we had to go back down the big hill and as we were going i was tired and it was kind of late so i couldent see were i was stepping very well so as we were going down the hill it was going all good until i hit a rock and fell down the hill and we got seperated as i fell all the way down the hill they were about half way when i hit bottom and then they rushed down to see if i was okay and i was but only a few cuts and bruses.we got back to the indian place in the woods and went home soon after that but before we left we drank some water and hate some dinner with them then we headed home and got home just i time of my bed time.

4 comments:

  1. I dont like this at all


    deion clayton

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  2. Nice Job!!! That pretty cool that you got to go to that one indian place!!! How long was the walk up to there! Sounds like a great hike! Yum! dinner sounded great! Nice job! The only thing that I have to say is that you need to work on you orgnization. It went backtracking a lot. All in all it was a great papper!!!
    -Morgan Strohschein

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  3. hahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahahahhahaahhahahahahhaah. you felllllll!branden snoddy

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  4. good use of heros journey.
    Robert Newcomb

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